"And
if my thought-dreams could be seen,
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
- Bob Dylan, It's Alright, Ma (I'm Only Bleeding)
Thanks for stopping by my blog and saying hello. I've just skimmed through a little of your blog too. I see you're a poet. Will have to check out your Lord Byron poem in detail after I'm finished writing this.
Thank you John for your kind comments regarding my "Sword Tip" entry on my blog site. While I am a little impatient with the quality of reponses, given the limited time we have to enjoy amd respond to Pete's writing, I have to remember that the electronic form is just evolving. Submitting a reply is instant which might explain some of the rambling that persists.
I would be curious to read what you could add regarding Chapter 7. The confessional tone just seemed, for me, to drive the piece forward in a way that previous chapters could not. (Style over substance is a sign of indecisiveness I think.) Chapter 7 seems clearest--the writing--to me. Whether it fits where it lands now, whether it's a part of the collection, whether it's not exactly fiction--I wonder what anyone (the better 'anyone's' includes you) could add.
I should say that it's nice to see you! You look as though you are honest. Thank you again for saying hello.
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Hi There!
Thanks for stopping by my blog and saying hello. I've just skimmed through a little of your blog too. I see you're a poet. Will have to check out your Lord Byron poem in detail after I'm finished writing this.
It's nice to meet you!
Thank you John for your kind comments regarding my "Sword Tip" entry on my blog site. While I am a little impatient with the quality of reponses, given the limited time we have to enjoy amd respond to Pete's writing, I have to remember that the electronic form is just evolving. Submitting a reply is instant which might explain some of the rambling that persists.
I would be curious to read what you could add regarding Chapter 7. The confessional tone just seemed, for me, to drive the piece forward in a way that previous chapters could not. (Style over substance is a sign of indecisiveness I think.) Chapter 7 seems clearest--the writing--to me. Whether it fits where it lands now, whether it's a part of the collection, whether it's not exactly fiction--I wonder what anyone (the better 'anyone's' includes you) could add.
I should say that it's nice to see you! You look as though you are honest. Thank you again for saying hello.
+ginab
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